lazy day words (mid class boredom)

[parch]

The Light in you
Really
burns me sometimes
but still

I won't let it
go out

For fear of the dark
& absence of your eyes
-dreamy
Laughing at me
Now

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dandelion breeze
white puffs
on my blue shoes

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in the dreams of regular heads
psychos don't feel anything
and in the deads of regular eyes
psychos don't see anything
but in his fiery blaze
psychos just
Don't

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I can remember
all the times we played ball
and everytime we ate together
but
now I think
what happened to
you
and where were you
in my eyes?
were you real?
were you awake?
was it really really you?

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in my night sky
of blue & purple longing
I wait the long years
evading light
for your dark touch
you & the stars
can take me now
and pull me down
forever

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Let's get charged
for the Fall-out
Electricity & Veins

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I was tripping thru the window
Falling
on my face

why did you have to laugh
so hard
and so strong?

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I am my new Religion
I am my non Decision

[Pixelina]

i'd say i like it generally, my favorite stanza being the one that starts, "in the dreams of regular heads, psychos don't..."

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[Hannibal]

These were different to me from you usual stuff, but I felt really solid reading them and enjoyed them. Some where a little different but good just the same. *nods* I really dug these.

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[machinery]

parch

what an arrayment of work...I really think that you could pick up on a couple of these and make them stronger....

but I have to say that this one is the most solid in my eyes:


in my night sky
of blue & purple longing
I wait the long years
evading light
for your dark touch
you & the stars
can take me now
and pull me down
forever

---
was there a main focus on these? or was this just the way your noggin worked that day?

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